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The Hirsch Phenomenon (Part 1 rewrite)

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The girl stepped out of the car. She shivered nervously at what she was about to do. Her parents in the car had no idea. She hadn't told them anything. Not about why she wanted to be dropped off at an office in Glendale while her parents did something else. Not about what she planned to do. Not even about the torments she had gone through over the past year or her secret little trip to Oregon.
She had the little model as an alibi. It's not like anyone would believe the truth anyway. Entropy was somewhere, watching. His alter egos were probably tormenting others at the same moment. She shivered as she approached the door. It was answered by someone she didn't recognize, an intern or a secretary, probably. She paused for a second.
"Can-can I see Alex Hirsch?" She asked. The intern gave her a weird look. He was carrying a stack of papers and looked rather busy and annoyed.
"Umm. Sure." the intern rolled his eyes when he thought the girl wasn't looking. "Let me take you to him."
He took her near a desk and absentmindedly shoved her towards it without checking to see if Alex Hirsch was actually there. 
"Special delivery!" He muttered, hurrying back off to his job. The girl almost tripped on a stuffed buffalo before bracing herself on the desk. She pulled herself up and flinched as she saw Alex's surprised face.
"Are you ok?" He asked. He looked confused. "And are you lost or something?"
The girl sighed and stoop up straight.
"Sorry about that. and no." She looked at him. "Do you know who I am?" Alex shook his head.
"No idea." He replied. The girl nodded as if that was what she wanted him to say. She muttered something, then glanced back at Alex.
"My name is Mirra." The girl said. "I-we need to talk." She grabbed something from her pocket. 
"What exactly do you want to ask?" He asked. 
"Well, since you put it that way.." Mirra said. She opened up her hand and held up the object. It was a grey-green triangular stone with a slight slit going through the bottom.
"What is this?" She asked.
"I have no idea."
Mirra muttered something.
"I need to give you something. Don't read it until you can't see me." She handed Alex a letter. He put it in the pocket of his jacket.
"That should explain some things." She added. Alex gave her a curious look as she picked up the triangular rock.
"Do you know what that thing is?" Alex asked.
"Yes. And you're about to find out what it does." She touched his forehead with the tip of the rock. Alex saw flashes of blue light.
Then everything disappeared.

(the main thing that's changed is the begining)

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OhMyParable's avatar
Great story! (I read the whole thing, I just felt like commenting on here). How long did take you to write this? I love how many different things to included from the show. :) Btw I thought I saw in the comments of one of the chapters that you had posted the whole story with the Dipper-bird thing...? Can you link that to me? :3